에세이 교정

에세이 교정

I love my father for many reasons.

 

First, He is my best teacher and has a lot of things that I can learn.

When I first entered a middle school, I was hard to adapt to the school because of shyness and lack of social skill.

At that time, my father said many stories about the environment that he had lived and social skill.

When he was young, he grew up very poorly.

And He is slow to understand. So, He tried to study and earn much money.

 

Second, He has a good personality.

He makes people comfortable.

And he is conservative and out of date but he tried to understand New-trends always.

And he often used to say "Always Do attentive consideration and live happily."

I tried to do attentive consideration and help other people.

 

Third, He love me so much without condition.

He always gives me think and care about me.

I have been grown up in a harmonious family.

My father tried to spend his time to family as he can.

But now　We have little time to meet becasue I live in a school dormitory in the home and elsewhere.

Sometimes, He call me and say "I miss you, I love you. How are you doing in your school? Did you have a meal? When are you coming home?" I cannot help but love him.

 

In conclusion, I am going to meet my father this weekend. 

에세이 교정 강좌 https://youtu.be/DRWGue3RCK0